F.+Midterm+Essay

Through out the beginning of the year, Nicole Hobbs has written some of her best essays. Most of them were a B or better. The persuasive essays where mostly A’s. I think that I deserve a B on this midterm essay because I worked very hard to write it, I answered all 6 W questions, and I was very persuasive. In the process of writing this essay I did all my prep work. Such as, making a thesis statement, and doing the outline. The thesis statement helped me find three reasons, so that I could already start thinking about what to right about. The outline basically put the whole essay together, so all I had to do was type it and make it into sentences. This all took time and effort, which should be shown in this paper. The work that I put in to the paper deserves a B.   In all three body paragraphs, all six W questions were answered. This is good for an essay because it give it body. If all the questions are answered, then all the information necessary is given. The six W questions are who, what, when, where, why, and how. By the end of this paper the teacher should be persuaded that I deserve a B because I answered all the questions and I told her why. I am very persuasive, when it comes to getting what I want or even what I deserve. I deserve a b because I persuaded the teacher to read my essay in the first place. I am not as persuasive as I should be or else I would have asked for an A. I used logical appeal by saying that mostly my entire essay grades where Bs. I also used ethos by appealing to some ones feelings feeling’s because I did all of this hard work. In this essay I tried to use all persuasive techniques that my teachers taught me. This is why I deserve a B.   Some people may say that this is essay is not worthy of a B because it was not long enough. Essays do not have to be very long to get a good grade. As long as they are persuasive and have everything that the teacher is looking for. I think that I deserve a B on this midterm essay because I worked very hard to write it, I answered all 6 W questions, and I was very persuasive.